Posted 06.11.2014 @ 12.51PM
And refined again. I guess the aeroplane doesn't really have anything to do with the marathon culture, so it doesn't make sense to include it. Maybe I was getting distracted by the words as opposed to what the marathon actually reflects.
Posted 06.11.2014 @ 12.30PM
Thank you very much for taking the time to give me some feedback. It is very much appreciated.
I've been playing around with the design, taking on board your advice and have come up with an altered design. I'm worried that now it might look too fiddly, though.